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Darkspace 1: The Phantom MIR |
GothThug {C?}
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|  Posted: 2005-07-06 13:42
Hi, this is my first attempt at fan fiction so here it goes. notice the title is a copy off of Star wars? lol
Chapter 1. Invasion Part 1
We Start off in the CD-36 System and Grand Admiral Bito is at his Command Station Orbitting the Forest Planet of Exathra.
I am LT Commander GothThug enroute to Exathra in a Drainer with a Fleet of Dreads and 1 Station, my commander, Grand Admiral Hellza at the station giving orders to watch out for suspicious activity enroute however we get dictored 50,000 GU From CD-36 and cant find out why. Suddenly an unknown ship decloaks off our port bows and it says "Interdictor". We try to hail it but no responce and all of a sudden 2 dreads and a cruiser decloak astern, "OMG" I say "those things are huge!!!!!!" "sir we are being hailed by the lead dread". "open a channel" I say, Unknown Dread Leader: "you are in violation of the treaty with the ICC turn back now or be destroyed" I say, "we're not going to attack sir we're on the way to CD-36 to help out Bito kill off some UGTO" Unknown Dread Leader "you have been warned" ***Cloaks*** "oh dear what are we gonna do"?
"GothThug go to CD-36 alone and tell bito what has happened i think we have a new enemy on our hands" Says Hellza. "Roger that, Open up a wormhole for me please so i can get there in 1 piece lol" I say ***now approaching Exathra*** "attention this is GothThug contacting Admbito come in please" "Goth? i thought they disbarred you" "yeah they did but they let me back...can i board the station i need to tell you something"
***on board the station***
"We have a new problem bito, we have an Unknown Force enroute to CD-36 and i think they have cloaking Tech, but where did they come from here i have a few Specs of them, (screen shots)" "OMG" Screams Bito "dude, they are called the MIR a race of Aliens set out to kill the kluth the UGTO hired them to off you guys 1 by 1 until theres no one left to defend Sirius"
"Admiral, we have Grand admiral Nubmarine Requesting permission to dock they have taken heavy damage to their Aft Engines and Nub is critically injured" "Very well" Bito says, "have Reload Drones on and prepare sickbay"
***3 hours later*** "ADMIRAL we have enemy ships decloaking off our port bow" Bito says, "oh lord the moment we feared is upon us, Weapons!, Arm the Ion Cannons and Anti-matter Torpedos lets see if we cant get their attention......FIRE!" ***Alpha hits the lead dread and the dread is shown on fire*** "we got it! its spinning out of control" i say, "sir, let me get back to my drainer i can soak up weapons fire better than you all can" "go Goth leave here and get back to the fleet, they need you here let me open up a worm hole" "sir our wormhole generators are disabled" I say, "oh man it looks like im long jumping out of here"
To Be continued on Chapter 2
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Chapter 2. Invasion Part 2
Before i could jump back to where my fleet was i was stopped by an incoming transmission, ***do not come back to the fleet we are under attack by the MIR*** i was shocked. "Bito, im gonna park under that huge dread and Self Destruct i want to be beamed aboard so i can join you guys." "alright" says Bito, "you will be on my station until i find a use for you" ***GothThug Has Ejected into space and beamed aboard the Station Bitosauforous***. The Drainer Exploded Under the dread causeing Critical damage to the engines. "FIRE ANOTHER ION CANNON SHOT AND LOAD TORPEDO BAYS" Bito Yelled "FIRE" The Dread Exploded in a Dazzeling Ball of Flame taking 2 Supplys and a Cruiser with it leaving Debris and tech we could use.
"GothThug Take this to the Research Lab on Exathra i wanna find out what we're dealing with" Bito says, "Okay" I say. "sickbay to admbito" "bito here" "Nub has 3rd Degree Burns on 30% of his body he'll be out of commission for awhile" Just then a Communicat came through the comm officers panel saying "we are the MIR, Lower your Defenses and Surrender your Ships, Resistance Is Futile, You will be Assimilated" I Said " oh my god are they some sort of Borg Type I've heard so much about on a highly publicicized TV Show Called Star Trek"?(insert random laugh here)
"Sir we have multiple Ships Exiting Hyperspace" "on screen" says bito I say, "oh my god its the Hive Excalber and the Siphon Antagonizer they survived the MIR attack" Bito says "Hail them and see if they're alright" "Sir the Hive is requesting to join the fleet" Bito says, "Sure" Meanwhile on board the Bitosauforous" "Sir, we are the shadow Pirates im on a rescue mission to save GothThug from the MIR is he here?" "yes" says Bito "he's in the guest quarters" "take me to him" Bito says "follow me" Bito takes them to Deck 12 (Guest Quarters) I say, "who are you?" we are the shadow pirates we have come to Rescue you from the ICC" I say, "what? i am not a prisoner here i nearly died getting here to warn the ICC of the impending Attack from the MIR" They say, "Sir, i apologize" I say, "thats okay take a load off boys you're welcome guests on here" Bito says, "Goth i have to go, i gotta see what kind of Damage the MIR did to the Tyconderoga" I say, "okay see ya"
***Several Minutes later an alarm Sounded*** "sir Multiple bogeys inbound" bito says, " well who are they?" "sir, its a Fleet of UGTO Battle Dreads and EAD's they are requesting permission to come in system, sir, its the GTN" Bito says, "Very well, lets see if the code they live by is Plausable" "we are being Hailed" Bito says, "on speaker"
"Admbito this is the EAD Demoria, Demorian speaking we have another mutual enemy this time and i dont think we can win this fight" Bito says, "i agree and i think the MIR are supposed to be your allies by my understanding if im correct if im not i apologize" Demorian says, "dude, its alright we were mislead into believing the MIR we're our allys but no they're to much like the Borg assimilating all in their path and this is pathetic but we've asked the Kluth to join us too." Just Then 10 Kluth Dreads Decloak "Sir this is Grand Admiral Coombie asking for a Truce" Adm Bito says, "Granted and we already have 1 of your members on board the Bitosoferous i believe you know him as GothThug?" Coombie acts shocked "wow i thought they decommissioned him, nevermind we've had some difficulty getting here all the systems from Sirius to Lalande have been taken over by the MIR, They have a new weapon that we havent seen that assimilates the planet and leaves it lifeless i beleive we cannot win this war" Bito says, "no need to be worried we've been working on new weapons, you see that Debris? thats from a UGTO Cruisers QST and our Ion Cannons so if you like Capture one of our planets and build new tech we'll give you our Schematics."
.....To Be Continued
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Chapter 3: Vengence is a dish that is best Served Cold
The Next Day 2 New Kluth Birds of Prey Decloaked off the Bitosopherous's bow and hailed them "Grand Admiral Bito this is the Bird of Prey Soyak and the Warbird Lex Talonis, My name is Queen Quistis and King Coombie, may we board your ship?" Bito says," but of course madam is there anything i can do? im sorry your system got invaded by the MIR" "its okay bito but im really lookin for my friend GothThug, Can i board your ship so i may speak with him?" "sure" bito says, ***Meanwhile in the guest quarters Quistis Explains the super weapon the MIR have Developed" "what??!?!?!" I growled "how can they have a Nuclear Shockwave Device?" its against the Galactic Rules" "She says, "I know, but we're not known for obeying the rules now are we GothThug?" (insert snide remark here)
***8 hours later*** "sir, the kluth and the UGTO have finished upgrades and we have too and we have a problem" Bito says, "yes? whats the problem?" "it appears the MIR have been up to date on our progress and have Developed a New Super Dread and its the Size of a Super Star Destroyer Class Vessel" Bito says, "oh great, now we can test our new weapons on those SOB's, Helm Bring us about and intercept that Dread" "yes Sir!" Bito says, "Helm Open up a wormhole and Rendevous us with that Dread and tell the Kluth and the UGTO to spare one of their Dreads we dont wanna go in alone and we will do the same" "Sir The Tyconderoga is repaired and Nubmarine is 100% better shall i escort him to his bridge?" Bito says," yes of course we need all the men we can muster mister" Bito says, "all ships prepare to go into the wormhole on my mark! "Bito this is the Siphon Dragons tail we're with you" "Bito this is the Elite Assault Dreadnaught Nefarious All weapons armed and ready," "bito this is the Tyconderoga all systems ready," Bito says, "Chaaaaaaaaaarge!"
***meanwhile across the wormhole*** "Sir, there is a subspace distortion directly ahead..sir!" ***ship Decloaks*** bito says, "FULL ABOUT THATS A SUPER DREAD ALRIGHT AND ITS GOT WEAPONS LOCK ON US!" ***5 Torpedos hit the Stations Bridge*** Bito says, " my goodness im glad we got those shield upgrades status!" "sir Full Shields are Down to 80% and Armor is down to 90%" "sir the Tyconderoga has taken hits! and the shields are down to 50%" Bito says, "open a channel" "Cant sir the communications are being jammed from that Deflection Tower on the lower hull" "interesting" Says bito "launch a squadron of Cloaked fighters to take out the tower! now! ***fighters launch and shoot Phase Shifting Torpedos into the tower and ***kaboooom***:***"Sir the Superdreads Communications Jammer is out and so is the shields" Bito says, "all ships open fire and use your special devices" "Tyconderoga ready" "dragons Tail ready" "EAD Nefarious Ready " *** Tyconderoga Fires Ion Cannons*** ***Dragons Tail Fires Stellar Incincerator*** ***EAD Nefarious Fires 3 QST's*** "sir this is the nefarious open a wormhole those QST's are gonna detonate once they reach 200GU's" Bito says, "QST's?" "yes sir Quantum Singularity Torpedo similar to our Quantum Singularity bombs only more powerful" Bito says, "i cant the drive isnt done recharging" "then get your people out of there atleast 500 Gu's away from the Dread" ***moments later a series of Explosions is heard about behind the fleet*** "sir, the dread has been destroyed" Bito says, "Well done guys, now lets get back to CD-36 and Repair i have a feeling we've gotten those SOB's Attention now" ***Red alert*** Bito says, "NOW WHAT?!?" "Sir we've been boarded by the MIR they are after the Kluth Guests" Bito says,"set auto destruct" "Sir?!?!?!" Bito says, "YOU HEARD ME!" ***AUTO DESTRUCT SET TO 10 MINUTES*** Bito says, "all hands this is the captain we're gonna evacuate the station and beam onto the EAD Nefarious" ***Me and the rest of the crew all but Bito beams aboard the EAD Nefarious*** "Helm Set a course for CD-36 Maximum Warp!" ***Station Explodes*** I say, "BITOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Bito says, "Goth? im alive however my leg is broke them stinkin MIR broke my ankle" I say, "i wont ask why" Just Then Fleet Admiral Demorian walks in "my my bito gotten yourself into quite a predicament there buddy" Bito says, "shut up and get us to CD-36 as fast as you can" Demorian says, "already enroute theres no trouble in CD-36 yet." "those are some impressive Quantum Torpedos Dem" Dem says, "thanx impressive Ion cannons" "Fleet Admiral Demorian your presence is requested on the bridge as well as bito" They Both say "very well" ***meanwhile on the bridge of the EAD*** *communications officer* "sir we got a distress call from Nicea they are under invasion from the MIR and request Assistance do we assist?" "Negative" says Demorian we proceed to CD-36 and get reinforcements" ***back at CD-36*** THe Fleet says, "welcome back guys, wheres Bito?" Bito says, "im right here, The Bitosopherous was a good station im gonna miss her" "sir Nicea Reports that half the fleet there has been destroyed apparently the MIR are using a Weapon called a Nuclear Subspace Shockwave Leveling Everything in its path....." Bito says, "send this to all ships...."Fleet this is Bito i have declared a state of emergency as the MIR are attacking and leveling the planets with a device we dont know how to counteract so please if you could get into your ships and Evacuate CD-36. we're gonna find a new home ladies gentleman and bugs (no offense goth)"
....To Be Concluded
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Chapter 4: Retribution: The Final Chapter
Its Been 4 Months since the ICC, UGTO and Kluth have formed an alliance against the MIR and have taken Refuge on 1 of the Kluths outter Systems called Groombridge 34 which was a System not taken. The Kluth have been busy in the ship yard making 4 New ships. The Colony which can Mount Lots of fighters 5 Heavy Disrupters and 3 Steller Incinerators, The Brood which in most Respects is a Kluth Command Dread, The Nest which is a step down from the Colony, and the Frigate Instars which is a step up from the beak but with Mine Slots. The UGTO have 2 new Shios, The Agincourt Class Carrier which can carry loads of weaponry and fighters and a New Destroyer. The ICC however have a Super Assault Dread that has 3 ION cannons, and 2 New Stations. The Command Station and the Assault Station Equipped with Hypermass Accelerators. Now little did the MIR know that humans are Very Good with weapons fire the kluth are not "Sir" the communications officer yelled "we have a Kluth Bird of Prey Decloaking off our port bow, sir its GothThugs Beak the Osprey" Bito says, "wow Goth has a way with names for his ships hehe very well have it dock in the shipyard on the ICE planet of Hell" ***moments later on the Ice Planet*** "GothThug i got what you asked me to get for you the Wing Tips are mounted with special weapons so you can act like its a Klingon Bird of Prey "Smilingbumpster says" I say, "why thank you" *Goth Gives Bumpster a Salute and bumpster goes to the Kluth Station"
***Moments Later a General Quarters have sounded*** "Bito" The comm Officer said "we have multiple bogeys in bound uncloaked its the MIR" Bito says, "all hands this is the admiral all people to their ships this is where we make our last stand!" ***moments later every ship was off the planets surface within minutes*** "Sir" The Sensor Officer said "the bogeys are 8 Dreads, 10 Cruisers, 20 Destroyers and 6 Scouts" Bito says, "this isnt an attack group this is an invasion force! all hands prepare to fire as soon as the worm hole opens!" "Helm Bring us about" Bitos AD got into position as the portal opened" "all ships Open fire on the scouts!" ***All scouts Destroyed*** Bito said, "that was easy" Just Then 2 more portals opened up from all around the planet and they found themselves surrounded "Sir theres another ship coming in from Sirius....oh my god sir! its the Hammer! a UGTO station with the greatest firepower ever known!" bito says "hail them" "hailing Frequences open sir" Hammer this is the Bitosaupherous II identify yourself over" Just then a Face appeared on the screen "Bito, i see you've run into danger once more" Bito exclaimed "ROGUE SPEAR! HOW AM I GLAD TO SEE YOU! if you could i need you to get within 20 Gu's from these MIR ships and Load up a bunch of Explosive material" Rogue says, "no problem" 2 hours into the War with the MIR Several Ships were destroyed along with the Tyconderoga but out of the ashes the Assault Cruiser Normandy came out of the ashes and Fired multiple alphas at the lead Super Dreadnaught of the MIR. 6 Kluth Dreads were heavily damaged and taking Repairs at the nearest planet. 2 Kluth Stations continued fire on the dreads until 1 was left "The Super MIR dread" however this one was powering up the weapon that leveled Nicea. "sir we cannot let another system be destroyed by that weapon! the comm officer explained Bito says, "Rogue are you ready?" Rogue says, "yep" Bito says, "all ships move away from the super dread" Rogue got within 20 GU From the Dread and started the countdown the dread was already at 50% hull from all the weapons fire. "all ships this is Rogue continue fireing at the target until the station is ready to blow up" Just then 6 Stellar Incinerators Rocked Rogues Station Rogue asked "careful! Alright i started a 5 minute silent count down when this is over the MIR homeworld will be shocked to learn that Honor is All and Rogue and the rest of the Fleet arent to be Messed around with!"
***5 Minutes later the station exploded taking the dread with it in a dazzeling ball of Flame*** Bito and the rest of the fleet "YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH ROGUE DID IT!" Several minutes later a shuttle pod landed on bitos ship and it was rogue he escaped the blast with critical damage to the systems. "come on guys lets go take back our systems, it will take the MIR sometime before they can regroup and rebuild. ***Sirius A is under Kluth Control*** CD-36 is under ICC Control*** *** SOL is under UGTO control*** as well as outlaying systems. To this day we do NOT know where the MIR came from but a new enemy awaits beyond the star system...but thats another story entirely
...The End
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| Posted: 2005-07-06 16:55
Nice
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2005-07-08 05:00
oh would someone please comment on my story. it took me 3 1/2 hours to write lol (note: i have a slow mind so it takes me awhile to write things lol)
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Fleet Admiral Busby
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| Posted: 2005-07-08 05:30
iam not in it pfft *crys* its ok
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2005-07-21 09:23
you'll be in Darkspace 2: Attack Of The Pirates 
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-13 20:21
*le sigh* no one reads my posts anymore -.-
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Peter Wiggin
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 00:19
Where am I? O where.. am I.... (and you cannot forget the almighty Faustus as God  (or if ur crossing starwars darkspace and star trek, u can use Q[that one guy...])
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DarkScorpion
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From: London England
| Posted: 2006-03-14 08:46
story is ok but the kluth joining with ugto after they hired the mir to wipe them out dosent sound right
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Coeus {NCX-Charger}
Admiral, I can't read,
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 09:05
it... still... make... brain... hurt....
A for effort though 
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 09:35
Scorpion, the MIR turned on the UGTO therefore they had to ally with all factions lol
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 09:43
oh, heres some Previews for the next one Darkspace II: Attack Of The Pirates
Bito is named Chancellor of the ICC
Coombie gets assassinated
GothThug gets critically injured during a ground assault on one of the Neutral worlds
EvilLOL dies on board his AC while attempting to avoid a boarding party
The MIR Return
GothTHug Gets promotion to 2nd Rear Admiral and Gets a Missle Cruiser Aply named the Soul Reaper
GothThug Meets up with Kit and the Starfury MC for the final battle that will take place in SOL
(stay tuned for spoilers) hehe
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 10:41
cool needs more action
i love action.............boom boomm ship have to go
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 12:44
I liked it, very funny, and was interesting enough to get me to read all of it (which is something).
Remember Ima priate in the next one
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GothThug {C?}
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| Posted: 2006-03-14 16:49
heh, be patient because cause im still writing the second story, and its a doozy, 15 Chapters
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