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Sardaukar
Admiral
Raven Warriors
Joined: October 08, 2002
Posts: 1656
|  Posted: 2005-09-14 19:13
I need to let a little bit of my soul out...
Unrequited
What if your dreams are
So close
you cannot grasp them
So far
you cannot escape them
So amazing
you cannot believe them
So joyful
you cannot love them
What if your dreams are
All you can imagine
All you'll ever need
What if your dreams
Are shattered?
- Jon "Sard" T.
[ This Message was edited by: Sardaukar {C?} on 2005-09-15 21:37 ]
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BackSlash
Marshal
Galactic Navy
Joined: March 23, 2003
Posts: 11183
From: Bristol, England
| Posted: 2005-09-14 19:31
Good stuff. I write poems of sorts, although I'm not posting them here...
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JRE
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Joined: August 14, 2003
Posts: 570
| Posted: 2005-09-15 10:51
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On 2005-09-14 19:31, BackSlash *Jack* wrote:
Good stuff. I write poems of sorts, although I'm not posting them here...
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Dont be scared Jack...
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Sixkiller
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Courageous Elite Commandos
Joined: May 11, 2005
Posts: 1786
From: Netherlands
| Posted: 2005-09-15 13:28
he doest want to get banned again, or perhaps even his post count deleted.
So.....
GO JACK POST IT
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BackSlash
Marshal
Galactic Navy
Joined: March 23, 2003
Posts: 11183
From: Bristol, England
| Posted: 2005-09-15 13:33
I'm deffinatly not posting it...
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Quietly confident
Admiral
Joined: June 28, 2005
Posts: 215
From: Luna, Sol.
| Posted: 2005-09-15 15:29
good poem sard, and im same as jack, you guys wouldn't want my poems on here, lol. they scare eve nthe saneist of people.
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Daylight \"The Beginning\"
Grand Admiral
Joined: July 24, 2002
Posts: 608
From: Oregon, USA
| Posted: 2005-09-15 15:51
What sane people...This is DS!
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Sardaukar
Admiral
Raven Warriors
Joined: October 08, 2002
Posts: 1656
| Posted: 2005-09-15 19:37
Eh. I wrote this in about minute when I was extremely depressed about something involving a girl... the girl, so to speak. It's brief, but each stanza has a deeper metaphorical meaning when you think about em... It just kind of poured out, I typed it as it came to me in about a minutes time.
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BackSlash
Marshal
Galactic Navy
Joined: March 23, 2003
Posts: 11183
From: Bristol, England
| Posted: 2005-09-15 21:56
Hair like gold
Eyes like the sea
Lips shimmer silver
How could this be
I just can't believe
I met someone like you
So full of love
Your words so true
Too perfect for words
Your beauty unmatched
I stare into your eyes
You're the perfect match
How did this happen
So sudden so quick
I'm starting to believe
I'm becoming lovesick
The world could end
Everyone in dispair
Aslong as im with you
I would not care
You're like some angel
Sent from above
Destined to meet
So I can give you my love
I care for you
I wait for your touch
I wrote this to tell you
I love you so much
Written by moi.
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Bobamelius
Grand Admiral
Galactic Navy
Joined: October 08, 2002
Posts: 2074
From: Ohio
| Posted: 2005-09-15 22:19
*Boos and throws tomatoes at Jack*
[ This Message was edited by: Bobamelius on 2005-09-15 22:19 ]
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Ramius
Fleet Admiral
Agents
Joined: January 12, 2002
Posts: 894
From: Ramius
| Posted: 2005-09-16 09:53
*throws a brick*
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Ham&Swiss
Grand Admiral
Joined: October 12, 2004
Posts: 418
From: 10$ to whoever finds me
| Posted: 2005-09-16 12:15
nice peom
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Daedalus Bum
Marshal
Joined: March 26, 2004
Posts: 86
From: Finland
| Posted: 2005-09-16 12:31
That poem just was to close to my heart jack :*(
Hehe just kidding xD
But i dont really like poems so much 
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Valerius{DK}
Grand Admiral
Joined: August 03, 2001
Posts: 595
From: Island of Zealand
| Posted: 2005-09-16 15:40
I KNEW IT..... you DO love me... 
btw, nice ones, both of you
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Abandoned Mind
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Joined: December 08, 2002
Posts: 130
From: Brattleboro, Vermont
| Posted: 2005-09-16 18:47
I read this poem on another forum. Just the other day, I liked it then also.
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