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warner_lowcharge
Admiral
Joined: September 27, 2004
Posts: 205
From: Finland
|  Posted: 2005-12-12 12:26
Mr ED is coming to Sol
(Santa Claus is coming to town)
You better watch out
You're soon gonna die
You better just cry
I'm telling you why
Mr ED is coming to Sol
He looks to the left,
He looks to the right.
He sees all the uggies with fear in their eyes
Mr ED is coming to Sol
He's got so many cannons,
He'll fire with them all;
You know whatever ship your in that he will simply maul
With particlecannons, you know the mighty ones
With PewPewPew ZOMG LAZERGUNS
Mr ED is coming to Sol
He's got so many cannons,
He'll fire with them all;
You know whatever ship your in that he will simply maul
You better watch out
You're soon gonna die
You better just cry
I'm telling you why
Mr ED is coming to Sol
Mr ED's a busy man he has no time to play
He's got millions of scouts to kill on Christmas day
Mr ED is coming to Sol
Coming to Sol
Mr ED is coming to Sol
Coming to Sol
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Ulric Winters
Fleet Admiral
Joined: February 21, 2004
Posts: 198
From: Somewhere
| Posted: 2005-12-12 12:34
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On 2005-12-11 19:41, Borg Drone 1 of 6 wrote:
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On 2005-12-11 01:50, Fatal Ants *XO 1* wrote:
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On 2005-12-11 01:07, Sardaukar wrote:
Holiday Bonus! Since I can't find the old post, here's "Deck the Hulls"
Deck the Hulls of ICC,
Fa la la la la, la la la la
Fire a beam and watch it gleam!
Fa la la la la, la la la la
Don't you love those cool shield flashes?
Fa la la, Fa la la, la-la-la
Fire some more, they'll soon be ashes!
Faa laa laa laa laaa, la-la, la, la
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I LOVE IT 
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nice
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a instant classic XD
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Coeus {NCX-Charger}
Admiral, I can't read,
Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004
Posts: 3635
From: South Philly
| Posted: 2005-12-12 17:03
HAHAHHAA! Uber duber 
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Enterprise
Chief Marshal
Joined: May 19, 2002
Posts: 2576
From: Hawthorne, Nevada
| Posted: 2005-12-12 17:23
Im suprised no one has done the twelve days of christmas.
Surely dont make me take the time down my extraordinary wit into such a prose.
-Ent
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Bobamelius
Grand Admiral
Galactic Navy
Joined: October 08, 2002
Posts: 2074
From: Ohio
| Posted: 2005-12-12 20:07
Warner... assault scouts > EDs.
Other than that, decent...
And good job Sard.
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Sardaukar
Admiral
Raven Warriors
Joined: October 08, 2002
Posts: 1656
| Posted: 2005-12-12 20:20
Thanks for the feedback, folks! Might be making a few more for a special edition topic... "A Very Spatchul Christmas".
I would do 12 days, but it seems overdone elsewhere and it's actually quite difficult to pull of at the level I try to work on... when making a spoof of an existing piece of prose, you should try to keep the original flow of the old one, and keep your syllables in line with the originals or indicate an intentional lengthening of a word. Otherwise, readers are left to figure out how to fit your shorter/longer stanza in with the original's flow. The best prose doesn't require any vulgar tricks of the tongue to sound right or sound like it fits where it should...
[ This Message was edited by: Sardaukar on 2005-12-12 20:27 ]
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