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LobbyZombie
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From: Sweden ftw
|  Posted: 2007-10-04 17:30
Well i suck on doing comedy fan fic. But i can do serious fan fic .. Here it is, My first attempt to make a fan fic! Please don't flame me  And post new ideas too!
ICC = BORG
KLUTH = LOBSTERS
UGTO = HUMANS
Captain's log, Stardate 8970.4.
We've encountred a strange race called the lobsters, and we hav...*buzzing sound orbits the room* Captain! Its the Icc! *click* I'm om my way!
Drafell > What happend?!
Tat officer > We found a ship labeled with a giant text ''ICC TEDDYBEAR''
Tat officer > They are hailing us sexy boy! Erhm ..... i mean Sir!
Drafell > Put it on the screen...
Unknown person > My name is Smokey, Captain Smokey.
*Suddenly the screen disappears and shows a bsod*
Drafell > Damit! STOP USING THE DAMN REMOTE! ....
[ This Message was edited by: LobbyZombie (ABM) on 2007-10-04 17:33 ]
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=Smokey=
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| Posted: 2007-10-04 17:41
i owned you guys
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Coeus
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From: Philly
| Posted: 2007-10-04 20:56
...*cough*
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From: dragonslayer83
| Posted: 2007-10-05 01:26
-.- them be fighting words that will cause me to come back to show the might of the UGTO
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LobbyZombie
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From: Sweden ftw
| Posted: 2007-10-05 11:40
well what did you think of it?
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=Smokey=
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| Posted: 2007-10-05 12:46
thought it was amazing
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LobbyZombie
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From: Sweden ftw
| Posted: 2007-10-05 13:03
*The Screen reappears again*
Smokey > So we meet again.
Drafell > We are on a peaceful mission to Kluth!
Smokey > We can't allow that.
Drafell > As you wish.
*The screen closes*
Tat officer > Shall i fire upon them?
Drafell > No, lets see what they'll do. I'll be in my ready room.
The captain then goes to his room and reads a rapport from a UGTO Command Dreadnought;
Stardate 8960.2
Earth
We've encountred several Kluth, They haven't yet attacked us and we are at red alert! The noise of their starships scares the crew and we are standing by. If battle begins, We would loose so UGTO's survival rests on the hand of USS Peachfur.
*The monitor then closes and the captain goes to his seat in the Bridge room*
Drafell > Fire AM torpedos and Particle cannons!
*Few moments later and USS Peachfur won but is severly damaged*
Drafell > Damage report!
Tat officer > We lost deck 5 and 32 and 49! Casulites : 301!
Drafell > Set an course to Starbase 4718
Drafell > Engage!
[ This Message was edited by: LobbyZombie (ABM) on 2007-10-06 05:33 ]
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=Smokey=
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| Posted: 2007-10-05 13:38
so was i blown up ?
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LobbyZombie
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From: Sweden ftw
| Posted: 2007-10-05 15:58
Yes but you'll have an interesting ending 
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From: Philly
| Posted: 2007-10-05 17:44
Remove me.
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LobbyZombie
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From: Sweden ftw
| Posted: 2007-10-05 18:22
Ok... You'll die intresting
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From: Philly
| Posted: 2007-10-05 19:57
No. Remove my name from this thread. You have an edit button, use it.
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From: close by
| Posted: 2007-10-05 22:33
ds is final error was this patch
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