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Jar Jar Binks
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|  Posted: 2009-02-21 00:22
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On 2009-02-20 18:43, Meko wrote:
Booo Hiss!!!!! 3dmax is the DEVIL!
les maya 4tw.
oh and "i see your pirate dread, and raise you a dread pirate" u made me laugh! i loved that movie... know why? cause you never mess with a cicillian!
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But Maya is oh so expensive compared to what you get. There's quite a few programs out there that are much cheaper and does almost exactly what Maya does.
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JBud
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 01:04
Re-Remodel (MKIII)
  
  
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Sens [R33]
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 12:51
Meh... where do I start? I dont feel like writing a paragraph so I'll just use bullets.
-waaay too blocky/geometric, you need to refine the shape
-textures are nice, but could be better
-whats with the red tubes? kinda random tbh.
-why are the guns bristling from the hull? its kinda akward seeing a projectile flying 30 degrees to the right out of a straight barrel
-fighterbay looks nice, but needs some work
-giant gannon? as cool as it sounds, it has no place in (the current version of) DS
-main body of the ship looks like a pryamid with the tip flattened, its an akward shape; consider having a oval/octogonal shape that wraps around rather than flattening out for the main body, but also avoid blocky shapes like rectangles.
-same thing goes for the pyramid dome-thingy with the blue panels at the fore section of the ship, its kind of an eyesore
-the nacelle on the aft seems out of place, on that note; don't put guns on every square-inch of the ship.
-I probally already said this, but the red is blegh
-Overall it looks pretty cool, but it's more ICCish than pirate. Refer to existing pirate ships for inspiration, this looks like something from the stargate series O_o.
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JBud
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 12:55
Go build your own, stop making posts in my threads, Sensi.
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Sens [R33]
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 12:59
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On 2009-02-21 12:55, JBud *COM*-Fatality- wrote:
Go build your own, stop making posts in my threads, Sensi.
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you asked for criticism by posting on fan art, you get it; hell I even complemented you, but if you cant even take than then grow up. I doubt you even read my post -.-
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:02
I did read your stupid little post, stop complaining about what you don't like about it and give me a damned complement (don't lie because you didnt already complement me, you just sat there and typed in what you don't like.... I'm sick of seeing your name in my threads because it is all negative.
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:02
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On 2009-02-21 12:55, JBud *COM*-Fatality- wrote:
Go build your own, stop making posts in my threads, Sensi.
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He's right though.
It's rather blocky and geometric. Look at the other Darkspace ships as guides to go buy. Their not so geometric.
As for visible turrets, there isn't much need for them in Darkspace since the weapons fire from various arcs and angles, and as far as I know, the Medusa engine does not support visible and moving turrets.
Also, turrets on models are NEVER made on the model themselves. Their a seperate model so they can move with firing arcs. And for the big Cannon.. Uh, no.
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:05
get your crappy ass name out too, you think I wanna see crim if I don't wanna see sensi? ya'll need to go start your own little complaining club, and stop hanging out in darkspace... go ruin another game...
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Sens [R33]
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:06
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On 2009-02-21 12:51, Sensitivity wrote:
Meh... where do I start? I dont feel like writing a paragraph so I'll just use bullets.
-waaay too blocky/geometric, you need to refine the shape
-textures are nice, but could be better
-whats with the red tubes? kinda random tbh.
-why are the guns bristling from the hull? its kinda akward seeing a projectile flying 30 degrees to the right out of a straight barrel
-fighterbay looks nice, but needs some work
-giant gannon? as cool as it sounds, it has no place in (the current version of) DS
-main body of the ship looks like a pryamid with the tip flattened, its an akward shape; consider having a oval/octogonal shape that wraps around rather than flattening out for the main body, but also avoid blocky shapes like rectangles.
-same thing goes for the pyramid dome-thingy with the blue panels at the fore section of the ship, its kind of an eyesore
-the nacelle on the aft seems out of place, on that note; don't put guns on every square-inch of the ship.
-I probally already said this, but the red is blegh
-Overall it looks pretty cool, but it's more ICCish than pirate. Refer to existing pirate ships for inspiration, this looks like something from the stargate series O_o.
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Its advice, you arent going to improve if everyone says "OMG YOUR SO AWESOME"..... but hell, screw it; if wanna live in your world of fantasy, go for it, I won't stop you.
Still think I didn't complement you?
[ This Message was edited by: Sensitivity on 2009-02-21 13:09 ]
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:08
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On 2009-02-21 13:05, JBud *COM*-Fatality- wrote:
get your crappy ass name out too, you think I wanna see crim if I don't wanna see sensi? ya'll need to go start your own little complaining club, and stop hanging out in darkspace... go ruin another game...
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What the hell is your problem? We're trying to give criticism, and HELP you get better at modeling.
If you read the post we make, you might learn something.
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JBud
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:10
if I needed or wanted any critisism I would have said in the top post for one, "what do you think?" in-fact I would never have posted it in darkspace.
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:14
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On 2009-02-21 13:10, JBud *COM*-Fatality- wrote:
if I needed or wanted any critisism I would have said in the top post for one, "what do you think?" in-fact I would never have posted it in darkspace.
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It's in the Fan-Art section, it's going to end up getting criticism. Infact, we aren't even the first to criticize it. You just have this hate campaign against us because we're abit more detailed with whats wrong, and what could make it better.
In all honesty, it's a good start. Alot better then my first ship I ever tried making.
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 13:27
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On 2009-02-21 13:14, Crim {Fear?} wrote:
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On 2009-02-21 13:10, JBud *COM*-Fatality- wrote:
if I needed or wanted any critisism I would have said in the top post for one, "what do you think?" in-fact I would never have posted it in darkspace.
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It's in the Fan-Art section, it's going to end up getting criticism. Infact, we aren't even the first to criticize it. You just have this hate campaign against us because we're abit more detailed with whats wrong, and what could make it better.
In all honesty, it's a good start. Alot better then my first ship I ever tried making.
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Thank-You Crim, took the words out of my mouth(I've never modeled mind you, but it doesn't a professional to judge; in the end it's the players that determines the sucess of a game, not the devs)
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Little Pet Slinki
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 14:13
Obviously you put some hard work into those models and they are rather good for a novice, utiliszing textures correctly I noticed, and making a model that looks like a decent ship, however it seems too blocky, it needs more definition and shape. (but this is to be expected for starter models)
Then It looks more of a Cruiser type ship, or even a large destroyer, the model itself seems to suit smaller ships, and I think darkspace needs to add more smaller ship designs - get away from the dreadspace ideas.
Otherwise well done, although your going to need to work on that attitude else you'll crash and burn, this is the internet and we are human - things are going to be judged for you to better yourself, I suggest either not posting on darkspace at all or posting with a pinch of salt and taking each piece of criticism to better yourself.
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Ham&Swiss
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| Posted: 2009-02-21 17:45
I liked the model...and the big canon...
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to all those who don't, you suck...this game need more uber canons...many man more
Good start, JBod
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