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Vice Adimral Chance Wilson. Part I |
Admiral C. Wilson
Admiral
Joined: July 06, 2010
Posts: 262
From: Arkansas
|  Posted: 2010-12-05 18:01
The bridge was tense as the ship slowed down. Vice Admiral Chance Wilson sat on his flag bridge. Reports where comeing in from scouts that were ahead. The ICC had massed 3 stations, 4 Dreads, 6 heavy Cruisers
and 3 supply ships for an invasion on luyten. But Admirals Wilson, Jackson, and Grant had been ordered to stop them and they would stop them at all costs.
"Captain report" said Chance. Flag Captain James Greenfeild looked up from the comm station. "Sir, there are now 2 stations, 6 dreads, 4 battle cruisers and 3 supply ships in are fleet now. Admiral Jackson has a fleet of 16 Battle cruisers on stand by and Admiral Grant has 4 stations and 10 Dreads ready to move on your command." "Good, Tell Grant to open fire when ready." Admiral Wilson picked up his coke from the drink holder and toke a swig, and looked out the veiw screen as the UGTO and ICC fleets begain to fight. From his ship, he could see only light flashs, but the tac plot beside the view screen told a somewhat diffrent story. 4 ICC cruisers where gone,as well as 3 UGTO dreads. Chance typed a command into his pad, the screen zoomed in. All of the stations where fighting Stations, The ICC was winning by a small amount, Them the tide changed. A ICC command station blew up, along with the 4 dreads that was surounding it. A great cheer whent up from the Titanic's bridge crew. Chance smiled.
It was lost as 7 Kluth Destroyers uncloaked in frount of his ship. "Hard to port" yelled Captain Greenfeild. The U.S.S Titanic slewed over to port,and opened up a brodside on the first Kluth to get in range. The ship bucked as it took hits. By now the rest of the ships in Chance's fleet had recovered and opened fire on the kluth. All 7 died fast but not before killing 2 battle cruisers and made a 3rd abadon ship. "Hot damn we got then" said a Ensign. Chance looked at the DCC report for his ship. Nothing to bad, only lost a beam mount. "Captain, Report on the ICC ships." said Chance. "Admiral they have.. That was as far as he got before the bridge was lost in a titanic explosion. It had been hit by a ICC AR missile that had broken past point defence. Captain Greenfeild died in his command chair, as well the helmsmen. Chance jumped from his chair to take the helm.....
Look for my next post for more.
[ This Message was edited by: Vice Admiral Chance Wilson on 2010-12-18 17:00 ]
[ This Message was edited by: Vice Admiral Chance Wilson on 2010-12-19 16:28 ]
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Koba
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Praetorian Wolves
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From: United States of America
| Posted: 2010-12-05 19:56
sorry but i prefer challenger's
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Lark of Serenity
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| Posted: 2010-12-05 21:17
im pretty sure the story of chance wilson is something more along the lines of "WILSON SHUT UP."
just saying.
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tucker32
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Joined: February 16, 2009
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From: deep jungle of vargo
| Posted: 2010-12-07 15:46
and the Luth Dreads are slowliy creeping up behind the icc fleet
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| Posted: 2010-12-07 17:33
u mean 7 kluth destroyers uncloak on 1 target and dont alpha it. wow they deserve to die for not bieng behind him and in range lol.
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Admiral C. Wilson
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From: Arkansas
| Posted: 2010-12-18 17:32
Chance spun the wheel to get the ship under control. "Commander seal the bridge."As air was sucked into space the blast sheilds turned on and every thing on the bridge whent quit. Officers where picking them selves up as Chance turned the ship to the ICC fleet that now surrounded them. By now the fleet that Admiral Grant had been commanding was destroyed, and Admiral Jackson had jumped to the gate, along with Chance's fleet. They had thought that the flag ship was done for, and had jumped out when 14 ICC Dreads jumped in with there 34 cruisers. Those ships now had the U.S.S Titanic surrounded. A ensign looked up from the comm station. "Admiral, a man going by the name "The Fridge" is hailing us." Chance left the helm and sat in his command chair. Medics had moved captain Greenfeild and the helmsmen off the bridge. "Ensign open a channel." The veiw screen lit up with the face of a ICC Cheif Marshel. "Hello, Admiral. As you can see, you are surrounded. Give up or be destroyed." Chance looked around at his crew. He knew most of them had familys, or other loved ones, he could not take them away from them. Of couarse the ICC planned to have a little "chat" with them adout earth, the ship, and other things of that matter, but after that the ICC most of the time sent them home. The same could not be said for Chance. He was a Admiral so the ICC would keep him. Chance looked at the man on the screen. "Fine, we give up." The Marshel looked happy to see that. " Admiral prepare to be boarded and leave your datebase intact. You and me will a talk adout, hmm your future. Good day Admiral." Chance looked at his stuned bridge crew. All where sad that there commader was never to see earth again.
5 weeks later....
"Well Admiral, I see it has come to this." said ICC Marshel Zavorer.
"I hope you know that Im following you on the fiasco." Chance was seated in front of the ICC Admiralty. A Fleet Admiral spoke up. "Mr.Wilson, you whert born on earth, you where born on fargo rock, so you have no reason to be with the UGTO. We are hurting for commanders at the moment and sence you have be let free, we feel that you should be come one of us. The man toke a drink from his cup. "I have just the thing for you, "Vice Admiral" Chance Wilson. Chance's eye brows whent up as the admiral gave him his own rank. The ICC had kept him from joining the UGTO just to make him a VA in there own navy. Chance had think this out. If he joined the ICC he would never set foot on earth again. On the other hand he would be shoot for loseing the battle. Chance stood up. "Im in."
Look for my next post for more
[ This Message was edited by: Vice Admiral Chance Wilson on 2010-12-19 16:27 ]
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Koba
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| Posted: 2010-12-18 17:48
and the ship bucked as it toke hits
buckled* took* 
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The Fridge
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| Posted: 2010-12-19 08:32
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Wait, what?
[That's such a dumb name.]
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tucker32
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From: deep jungle of vargo
| Posted: 2010-12-20 00:07
lol there are almost a trillion people living now in all of space im preety sure there are other ppl named fridge also i like the twist in the story of how he switched sides
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JBud
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From: Behind you.
| Posted: 2010-12-20 03:54
This should be taken purely as criticism, and not anything else:
I honestly think you should type these out in MS Word, look out for the green and red squiggly lines, and right-click them for a solution. The story isn't all that bad, but your grammar sucks.
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Saphirako
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Joined: December 22, 2009
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From: Deep in the void of space...
| Posted: 2010-12-20 08:32
Chance, I do love the story! You should include your promotion in it, it'll be awesome! And the captain of my flagship, The Aurora, is Saphirako Elemari, if you wanted to add me in (Please do!). I love your work, keep it up! Godspeed and see you in the Metaverse...
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Admiral C. Wilson
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From: Arkansas
| Posted: 2010-12-20 11:45
Chance once again sat on his flag bridge.After joining Faster than Light fleet he had been given orders to go none other than Fargo Rock. After the fiasco's the UGTO and Kluth made, the ICC had been sending more ships to defend the system. Now aremed with a Missile Dread Chance and a squadron of Heavy Cruisers and Supply ships sat 1000 gu of the gate. Chance had been promoted COM in other words Squadron commander. He like the the sound of that. An ensign looked up from his screen."Admiral, your new flag captain is arriveing." Chance stood up."Ensign send the side party down there and Im on my way." Chance walked to the lift."Shuttle bay." The lift shot down. Chance was in for a treat, for his "flag captain" was an old high school love and he had been woundring how she would respond to finding out who he was.The lift stoped and Chance steped out. The officer on deck spun on his heels as Chance made his way over. "Admiral on deck." He looked flustered. A shuttle was makeing its way to the landing pad.The shuttle landed with a soft puff. The Side party saluted as Caitlin Michelle Tillman steped off the shuttle. A engineer almost droped his scanner. She was 6ft tall with gold hair brown eyes and she had a super model body. Half the male personale almost lost there composer. Chance steped forward to greet her. She was the first to speak. "Admiral Im....Chance?"Good to see you to Caity." She stoped in her tracks."No,your UGTO!!!"Not any more, Im COM in FTL."Chance its been years, how do you think we can work togeather with are history?" Chance and Caitlin walked to the lift."Bridge. Now Caity you and I know we still love each other, but we are officers and we can act as such.The lift stoped and they steped off. "Admiral and Captain on the bridge"said the officer of the watch. Chance walked to his command chair and sat down. Caity whent to here chair as well." Now Caity as i was saying, you...." UGTO ships comeing out of the gate admiral!!!" Chance looked at the veiw screen as 2 Battle stations and 17 Dreads jumped in. Chance spun to look at the tac officer. "Open fire!!!""Yes sir. The C.S.S Aurora is jumping in with 4 Dreads and 13 Heavy Cruisers. Chance looked as the UGTO and ICC crashed togeather. "Commander, send in are escorts to help." Chance's ship fired missiles as all his escorts flew into battle.
look for more in my next post
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Saphirako
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Joined: December 22, 2009
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From: Deep in the void of space...
| Posted: 2010-12-21 17:48
I like it! Keep it up! And I need a name for your squadron... Since your so active I thought you should have the first one (after mine...). Please give me a name so I can add it to thew website and my personal Database... Thanks! Oh, by the way, The Aurora isn't a C.S.S... Shes an Ancient battleship from Stargate Atlantis... 2A.C.B. (Ancient Aurora Class Battleship) is the title. Thanks and keep it up!
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| Posted: 2010-12-23 02:32
THAT TRAITEROUS ICC REBEL! WE'LL HANG HIM FOR TREASON!!! (no offence) 
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jamesbob
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| Posted: 2010-12-23 04:00
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On 2010-12-23 02:32, .MaGoo. wrote:
THAT TRAITEROUS ICC REBEL! WE'LL HANG HIM FOR TREASON!!! (no offence)
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no offence magoo but we are still waiting for the day you actually hang one of us
and seriously what is with men and their fantasys god.
(yes i am a guy my fantasys do not involve hot chicks they sadly involve figuring the best way to blow a lobster up into a million peices while using the least amount of energy humanly possible (so far cold fusion is winning )
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