On 2007-09-12 00:21, GothThug{C?} wrote:
....oh my god...where is the admin interference here? i demand explainations asap!

On 2007-09-13 06:51, GothThug{C?} wrote:
um hawk....Slinker already Rewrote part 2 of the first chapter....im still waiting for help on chapter 2...i've got it half way done....but i've got a case of writers block because of this crap... ugh

On 2007-07-08 03:52, GothThug{C?} wrote:
Chapter 1: First Mission: Part 1
0500 Zulu Time March 5th 2275
Location: San Fransisco, California
It was an ordinary morning for the young fleet admiral. He Got up..Took a shower..Got dressed and headed off to work. Upon Arriving at UGTO headquarters he received a breifing from Grand Admiral Carlos Giving Orders for a search and Rescue mission deep in Kluth space. He didnt like this idea. But as a subordinate he has to do as he's told or he goes to the brig. "Aye Sir. i shall have them back in 2-3 days." "you have less than that Porter " "Make it a day in a half." "Aye sir" Now Porter has to find a crew for his Ship.."The WKAS Axeleon" An EAD in orbit around the Luna Shipyard.

0900 Zulu Time March 5th 2275
Location: Luna Shipyards

"Fleet Admiral On the Bridge!" Ensign Renshaw says, "Thank You Ensign as you were" Porter says, "Porter let me introduce you to your crew" Renshaw says, "This is 2nd Lieut. Evan...Your Weapons officer Ensign Faloan...and in Engineering..Vice Admiral Christian" "Okay, Crew, we're goin on a Search and Rescue mission so we need to make this ship battle ready asap..Renshaw..you're doubleing as our Medical officer...get to sickbay and Prepare it for the Injured." "thank you...You are Dismissed" "Engineering" "Aye Sir" prepare for departure" "aye sir...Inertial Dampners at 90%"
The ship then takes off and sets course for Kluth space..The ship class is designated "Elite Assault Dreadnaught" its a tough ship..but has its weak points. Little Does the Fleet Admiral know...he's walking into a trap.

1030 Zulu Time March 5th 2275
Location: Groombridge

"Sir! "we have found the ship...its floating helplessly in space and theres a big gapping hole on the bridge section" "Make a note in the ships log..Found Ship "The EWS Veridian" No Survivors" "Sir we have another ship on scope exiting the system" "on screen" "oh my god...Scan that ship i want to know what that is." The Tactical screen reads it as a kluth siphon But its too heavily damaged to put up a fight. "Sir do we attack?" "Negative..Scan that ship for the Veridian crew" "Im Reading 200 Life Signs..4 Humans" "That means 196 are kluth Warriors...Call in for Reinforcements we're gonna need it"

To Be Continued.....


[ This Message was edited by: GothThug {C?} on 2007-09-06 19:25 ]