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 Author Stranger In a Strange land
NZ-juex16
Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-03-31 03:32   
Update time.......

Well I've been under alot of pressure latly for school assmints etc and i've had little time for writing, i'm sorry for this.

I was hit by a Car going round a round-about a few days ago....lol didn't really help the matter.

I've had one good thing come out of this time not writing in that i've devoloped a Soild plot line which i think will make things very interesting and i finally can stop going round in circles plot wise.

Sorry for the faluse alarm if you thought a new Chapter was out...

NZ
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tucker32
Fleet Admiral

Joined: February 16, 2009
Posts: 141
From: deep jungle of vargo
Posted: 2011-04-03 02:23   
im going to kill u for makeing me wait this long....... okay fit rage over hope u didn't get hurt that badly from the car
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Posted: 2011-04-03 03:35   
and add me
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NZ-juex16
Admiral
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Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-04-04 00:26   
Righto righto

i'm fine just a graze on my arm, Insurance stuff is the reall killer....

Writing is on my to do list right under sorting out the Ball coming up so it's around 4th-5th i've got PPL tests coming up so it's taking all my time.

Don't worry Magoo you'll be added......
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U.W.S Melborne

I.S.S Achilles

Author of Stanger in a Strange land.

NZ-juex16
Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-04-17 06:34   
Well it's here! luckly thirteen! It's weird.....but sure she's guna excit!


Chapter 13

Throughout human history people comment on something that almost everybody can relate to having felt it at least once before in there life’s.
And no it’s not love, it’s something that you could say maybe….maybe even predicts what we now know as ‘love’ it’s something almost unreal.
The carm before the storm.

The total….., stillness that is seen before mother natural go’s on a rampage or before we humans go to battle, it always has a stillness, a carm before anything big (or small) takes place it’s an unreal feeling.
These men these people that the rebels label invaders were not fanatics (well most) they were simply young serviceman and woman doing there job they did not know who they truly served, or what they truly fraught for, the one thing they did know was that these people were shooting at them, which required a response no matter who you were.


“Jack!” yelled someone

The Rebel fighter known as jack tried opening his eyes, he managed to start coming to, to the figure of a small man in combat fatigues and a beret.

There was gun shots going off all round them, wising past, not to worry should only worry when they make a clapping noise as they wiss past, that means there real close.

The small man turned his body and fired two shots from his colt Python towards the enemy, he bent down and grabbed jack by the arm and lifted him too his feet.

“You’ll die when I say you can die!” yelled the small man “Now go kick some ass!”

Jack got up and found his rifle and ran towards the front.

“Sir!” yelled someone, “We’re been push back! We can’t hold much longer”

“Roger fall back!” Yelled the small man, “Order a fighter to bomb the yellow smoke!”

“Yes sir!”

The small man threw a smoke grenade out in front of him.

“Let’s move before the fireworks come!”

“Juex you have the only bombs left!”

“Roger I see it, cover me!”

Juex broke into a right hand rollover and switched to Air to ground radar and selected his target and primed the trigger.

The round “pickle” on his HUD crossed the green square I.D’ing the target and dropped a single 500lb bomb on the target

“Pickle” Said Juex Fighter jargon meaning he had dropped his bomb.
Juex was at 1000ft AGL (above ground level) when he released his bomb and flying at around 350-400 kilometres per hour the bomb would travel vertically almost 200+ feet landing exactly on the dot where he had aimed.
Juex Banked 90 degrees left and pull back hard pulling 7G’s or seven times the force of Gravity and looked to where he had aimed. Everything was in a cloud of smoke, he was bang on. As always.

After an hour of heavy fighting finally rebels stormed the Beehive and Rebel Specialised building clearers made their way through killing everything that moved.

They soon found the acting Governor and shot both knee caps clear off and let him bleed to death, slowly, painfully like it should have been.
Juex and the other Fighters had their cue to leave, the flights covering there exit waited a further hour covering the retreat of the ground forces from fighters and all others made their own way heading in different directions randomly so that only one or two may be attacked at a time.
Juex and his wingman flew over the centre of the north Island pass with 200KM east of former RNZAF Ohakea, I rather un needed risk once you think that Ohakea is the main airbase for the whole country and would be crawling with enemy fighters that could easily kill them without thinking. But Since someone had to take the route, Juex thought it would be better he did since he was the better experienced at Air to air combat.

Juex Checked his instruments, he was sucking on an Orange K-bar toffee lolly he enjoyed eating while flying, he kept him alert and stopped him from getting motion sickness from the constant eye and head movements needed in Air combat, although the actual aerobatics involved was a factor, the constant movement of the eyes and head led to bad motion sickness, he however has never chucked in/during combat.

Everything was looking good, the sun was at its mid-morning height and the golden rays were beaming in from the east bouncing off the micro water droplets in the atmosphere creating a golden backdrop on the eastern horizon, Juex got his Ray-ban Aviators out and put them on, instead of using his helmet visor, looks cooler then the visor. Something caught Juex’s eye he looked down to his panel and noticed a green blimp on his threat warning radar, a pair of SA-6’s 20 kilometres to the north east.

Suddenly sirens and alarm bells were screaming their heads off, and red lights flashing, signalling a SAM launch and he was the target. Juex began evasive manoeuvres and let of a set of flares and chafes he descended rapidly to the deck and set off more flares and chafes but they didn’t deter the Russian missile and it blew just under his right ring, he took no chances and he and his weapons officer ejected.



“Admiral!”

“Yes” replied the Admiral

“I’m picking up a SOS from a number of ships within a small range of each other”

Fleet Admiral Magoo, sat there pondering his options.

“can you I.D the fraction?” he asked.

“Eh gime a minute sir………….Sir I’m picking up a mix of both ICC and UGTO transponders, and there seems to be faint readings from I think to be a set of pirate units as well”

“Pirates? They have transponders?”

“Do now sir”

“Right……hmmm feels like a trap to me….” “Comm, Helm, I want two of our corvettes to jump ahead and scout it out while we follow 900GU behind, then drop us 3000GU before they do”

“Aye Sir” Cried out both the helm and Comm officers.


One week later…….

“He still comaed out?” asked Shadowalker

“Yep” replied Flash

All the people in Juex’s room looked at him, he was so peaceful, just looked
like he could just wake up and go make a Tea of coffee right now like he just had a rough night at the base pub.
Flash, Shadowalker and Larna looked around at the men in the hospital
room.

Two Fleet Admirals stood slient.

Chief Marshal flash spoke.

“Gentlemen do you know why you’re here?” he asked

“No not really no sir” answered Fleet Admiral Magoo

Flash tossed them a folder.

“Find a seat and indulge yourself, just read the summery and read the rest
later”

The summery read all about Juex, his past etc but that didn’t really come to a big surprise, there were people almost 150+ so 70 more years is believable. It was the last two pages, taken from Juex’s hard covered black
Diary that was of interest.

April 18th 2011

Well I’m finally back from the North Island…..well what to say about that…….lol we took pretty high casutilys compared to what I thought we would take.

500 dead and 1000+ wounded not to mention losing three Jets. However our objective was gained and we will plan another to keep them on their toes, I’m starting to question the……..the motivation of not only the troops but the officers as well. These constant large scale raids are killing us, and I fear we may lose everything if something isn’t done soon.

April 20th


I sat down all our officers and SNR NCO’s. I thought of reminding them of our goals but I decided against it. I have called a complete stop to large scale op’s and told all units only to maintain light raids until further notice. Add to this I have also let everybody who wish’s so…..to leave with no questions asked. I think it’s for the best, some haven’t seen there family’s in months some years most however decided to stay, only around 20 from the my unit left, all had kids and a wife.

April 24th

. ANZAC day, tomorrow All units will hold a cease fire from midnight.

. Saw a large meteor shower or something as I went to the Latrine, looked like they could of landed in NZ I’ve contacted all units to search around if they see anything.

ANZAC DAY, April 25th

ANZAC day, cease fire in effect, well one sided anyways.

As for those meteors, a unit’s throughout the middle of the south Island have also reported them, and the Oatgo highlands unit has reported some making landfall and have sent a unit to investigate…..lol Aliens landing in NZ ,haha shorty will like that one at the next brief!

April 30th
My god, yesterday we received a report from the Oatgo highlanders, Southland plains and Canterbury plains that they have found the crash sites of the meteorites……and they have reported that they are of Human make……space ships…….with live human crews. Who claim to know ME but they could not correctly name the present year saying it was 2272!

May 3rd
Update on our alien friends. It seems they are from a human faction called the United Galactic Trade Organisation from the year 2272, they claim to be following clues from me which I wrote in this present time in which they followed and wound up going back in time, just as I had written it! I have ordered that they be guarded and that the highest rankings be brought back to Invercargill head base for me to personally interview them.

May 4th
They have arrived, I’m letting them sink in at our VIP barracks and will go see them soon. They seem to refuse to hand over the content of their mission hand out, saying they would change the timeline or something. I will clear that up by mentioning that you cannot change what will happen by going into the past, for they have already done it in order for them to be where they are at the present time.

UPDATE; May god have mercy on our souls.

NAMES given in order of rank.

Admiral Shadowalker

Fleet Admiral Tucker

Fleet Admiral MaGoo

Captain Furlough

All those reading including Larna and Shadowalker looked stuned.

“He gives a give transcript on what you guys told him, which I have decided not to include, I ain’t paying you just to read off a script you know.
They go on to describe where I sent you, and how you ended up on Earth….and how lucky you guys were found by Juex’s troops rather than the people he’s fighting” said Flash

“So so what happens now?” asked Tucker.

“Well….I’m sending you to the part of space I’m meant to send you too, where I’ve already sent you….rather” Flash gave a confused look to himself.

“So you’re just going to follow what’s already happened is that it?” asked
Magoo

“I guess I am Mag”

“People like to think that we are in control of our destinies of what
happens to us is up to us, this may go against everything written on your
moral code, but if Juex has taught us anything right now…..it’s that what we do is set in concrete, so what you do…..do not fear that it was not
what happened last time, because it’s what you will do next time” said
Flash

“So sir…… your saying this will happen again?” ask Larna

“Pretty much, it will be an endless cycle, time will carry on as normal, but
this will always happen again and again.”

“So yous need not me to tell me your mission, as A. it’s written on that
folder for you, and B. you propley have already worked it out by now?

Flash Smiled.




“Questions?”














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U.W.S Melborne

I.S.S Achilles

Author of Stanger in a Strange land.

MaGoo
Fleet Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: March 18, 2009
Posts: 79
From: USA
Posted: 2011-04-18 01:57   
awesome, even threw my nickname in there. good story also. interesting.
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Kenny_Naboo
Marshal
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Joined: January 11, 2010
Posts: 3823
From: LobsterTown
Posted: 2011-04-18 04:11   

The flashbacks/forwards are giving me a headache.
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Joined: September 23, 2007
Posts: 709
From: Shadows
Posted: 2011-04-18 07:14   
was like," mhmm... mhmm... mhmm...mhmm... wait WHAT!!!?!?!..." lol, it was great
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NZ-juex16
Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-04-18 23:30   
Quote:

On 2011-04-18 04:11, Kenny_Naboo[+R] wrote:

The flashbacks/forwards are giving me a headache.




Then your going to love the next chapter.....it's guna give you a maigrain...........
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jamesbob
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Joined: August 22, 2009
Posts: 410
Posted: 2011-04-19 09:24   
Quote:

On 2011-04-18 23:30, NZ-juex16 wrote:
Quote:

On 2011-04-18 04:11, Kenny_Naboo[+R] wrote:

The flashbacks/forwards are giving me a headache.




Then your going to love the next chapter.....it's guna give you a maigrain...........





don't make me go kluth and rape you with a mandi
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Kenny_Naboo
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Joined: January 11, 2010
Posts: 3823
From: LobsterTown
Posted: 2011-04-20 04:03   
Quote:

On 2011-04-18 23:30, NZ-juex16 wrote:
Quote:

On 2011-04-18 04:11, Kenny_Naboo[+R] wrote:

The flashbacks/forwards are giving me a headache.




Then your going to love the next chapter.....it's guna give you a maigrain...........





I dunno what's a maigrain.

But all that time travelling is giving me a migraine.


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tucker32
Fleet Admiral

Joined: February 16, 2009
Posts: 141
From: deep jungle of vargo
Posted: 2011-04-20 18:39   
hmm i like it
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NZ-juex16
Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-04-21 02:23   
A good old fashion long chapter.....this is 20 plus pages so yay! i will be sadly however be away till the 1st of May so no more chapters till well after then, i will do my best to work on one on the way up (it's a two day bus trip to get there)






Chapter 14


May 6th 2011

For the first time since…..well the first time I took full command of a unit, I get the ‘leadership’ quall inside me, it feels like the first time you ever take a group on a activity with you being the ultimate decision on what to do. It’s strange for it to come back now like it has.
I just don’t know what to believe anymore……

May 9th 2011
I’m getting reports of further ‘ships’ making landfall in Australia………..

Shadowalker looked up from the entrées. “What did this mean and what’s it got to do with me?” he thought.



There was a sudden bang, the canopy blew away…..then the rockets under the seat fired and his body was subjected to 25G’s he weighed over two tons he was pushed clear of the condemned Jet, he gained around 900ft when he stopped going up, and gravity did what she does best soon the seat fell away and Juex’s legs dangled wildly in the air…..he slowly drifted back down to Earth……slowly….so slow in fact he started fallen asleep he only woke up as his legs smashed into the ground.

*Snap*

By-by ankle.

The pain flooded up his left leg. *ough!* Juex laid on the ground, he saw his weapons officer land on the other side of the valley, it was a small plain surrounded by hills not more than 100 meters in radius and looked like a lolly pop from the air or on a map. Juex Quickly got up, he’d yet to realise the full extent of the injury, adrenaline ran though his veins…..masking the full extent of the pain.

Juex quickly started bringing in his parachute and started burying it. He looked over to see his weapons officer coming towards him and they buried there shoots together.

“Well where two from here bro?” he asked

Juex put his survival pack on and put a mag into his soviet era Makarov pistol. Juex like old soviet weapons and for its relative size and weight the Makarov the Makarov 9x18mm round packed slightly less punch then the standard 9mm round but is slightly bigger than the 9mm round and therefore incompatible with each other, if say a 9x18mm round fired in a 9mm pistol it would soon jam after 2-3 shoots and could explode in the users hand and the 9mm round would soon destroy a 9x18mm firearm resulting in the same outcome as the former 9mm pistol with a 9x18 round.

And it was the only pistol Juex had that could fit in his bag.

“Well we better get moving cause we’re about to be covered by thousands of troops in a few minutes”

“Ok….are you able to walk sir?”

“No but I’m going to anyways, head towards the nearest forest or something and hide best you can, I’ll catch up.”

“Sir?”

“Just go because I know I will slow you down.”

“But you haven’t even tried….”

“JUST GO!”

“Sir”

The officer turned and head west towards the small forest he saw before being shot down. Juex on the other hand headed towards the middle of the small valley, it was covered in tussock grass and just plain old grass, a bit exposing but it had to be done, cause if one’s caught only one is caught not both of them at the same time.

Juex did his best at a run, but all he could get was a hobble and a scream but was making good progress he was around halfway/three quarters of the way though when he stopped. The thunder clapping noise of a familiar aircraft, it was coming and he knew they were coming in search of the downed planes aircrew. His best option at the moment was to hide and hope they did have thermal imaging on board. He found a large tussock bush around 2 meters square and crawled into the middle and began doing his best to cover himself in grass and mud to best his chances of not being seen. There was long grass inside the little pocket he was in so he also decided to try weave this though his hair and also though his boots and covered those in mud as well.

The art of camouflage and being hidden, stealthily and quiet is not an easy skill to master, and there will be always someone in equal skill as you in finding those who are hidden, these are a few things that Juex has learnt over the last few years.

Daylight stealth.

Colour! Colour! Oh how important colour is! In the eye there are two types of receptors which are at the back of the eye on the retina Cones and Rods.

For every Cone there is a nerve. So Cones give us our shape colour vision in the centre of our eye in a known small circle and our sharpness in vision decreases slowly the further out we go. You may not know this but there is a Blind spot in the very centre of your eye….i kid you not, if you do a test you will find it. Try this; get a A4 piece of paper and draw a small size circle around 6cm form the centre. Now draw a thick line exactly mirroring the position of the circle so it looks like this:

A G

Now hold the paper at arm’s length and look with both eyes on the left hand object. Now slowly bring it closer your face………

Did you see the right hand object go away? If you didn’t you did it wrong, so try again! If you did you know why?
Because the optic nerve that connects the eye to the brain is in the centre of the eye ball, therefore there are no Cones or Rods receiving light to process, therefore you see nothing! BUT how come I do? Because your brain simply fills in the gaps with what it think should be there! So you may see nothing but in actual fact there is a tiger jumping at you!
Cones give us our colour vision, they give us shape vision but they don’t see in the dark well! They don’t spot movement as easily also and why will be explained later in night time stealth but this means is that generally in day time, movement in a stealth environment can be forgiven so long as that they are subtle and don’t draw attention to you. Cones can see long distances, so be watchful of this

All that can be said for Stealth in the day is these few things.

One: Blend in to your environment the cones CAN tell colours apart so a pink cloth in a green bush is easily seen.

Two: Movement can be easily done so much as long as you blend in and don’t draw attention to yourself small movements to area that is easily concealed is the key, but not needed so long as you blend in, you can hide
anywhere, so long as you blend in.

Three: Noise is a BIG no no in any stealth form, be VERY careful of where you put your next limb at, cause we all know what that snapping twig can end up bringing!

Night Stealth

At night the Cones do not receive enough light to operate effectively therefore control of vision falls on the rods which are around the outside of the Retina, they give us our preverbal vision and spot movement really easy. They cannot see colour and you have good old black white and grey is what you will see and they also are not well refined so vision is burly and out of focus, this is because unlike the Cones which have one Cone per nerve but Rods rather have 17 rods per Nerve.

In condition of low light where there isn’t enough light for the Cones to work it takes around 30 minutes for them to shut down completely so therefore it takes 30 minutes to adapt to low light conditions. Oh and that blind spot you have?.....yeah that’s twice as worse now as you have lost the vision coming from the centre of your eye. A quick test is to wait for 30 minutes in the dark, then go outside and steer at a star…..it will disappear, because you can’t see in the centre of your eye so it disappears. If you want to look at a small light source at night, look to the left or right of it and it will not go away. Careful though! If the light is too great your cones will take over again and you’ll have to wait another 30 minutes! Rods also do not see far away so your limited in the distance you can see.

So, how to we remain stealthy at night knowing this?

Well heres the tips

One. DON’T MOVE!!!!!!!!!! If you know there is someone close or near you DON’T MOVE AT ALL COSTS!!!! I don’t care if there’s a stick jamming up your ass if you move you WILL be seen! This as explained earlier is because the rods spot movement VERY easily and the person will automacitcly look towards that source of movement! Aka YOU! If you must move, small very small movements should be made. And if you are hiding and you are steering straight at you searcher DON’T MOVE! Nine time out of ten they haven’t seen you! And by running away you have given yourself away.

Two. The Rods do not see colours! Therefore walking round in white at night although not recommended is acceptable the only colours you should avoid is high vis colours like bright yellow and orange apart from that just about any colour will suit so long as you stick with number one.

Three. Noise is a key thing in night time stealth; with vision being severely limited the ears are your next best friend if you are hunting someone. Therefore, like in daytime you must remain quiet! Because a very used tactic in finding an enemy at night is to stop and listen for noise and head towards that noise if something is heard, and 8 times out of ten you will find someone because of this.

Those are the basics, and if you can master everything in those two lists, you will not be found by a mere human! Dogs are a different story however, but we shall not worry about them.

Juex laid still, he put a bit more mud over his hands and made a little opening so that he could see, it’s one thing to remain hidden, but it’s a right royal pain not watching the people hunting you cause you don’t know what’s going on, whether there close, or you have an opening to move to a better position so it’s good to have a small view port.

The Helicopter flew straight overhead Juex.

Juex confirmed what he thought the aircraft was, a UH-1 Huey, the thunder clap the blades make were unmasikely those of the Huey, the iconic symbol of the Vietnam War. Depending on how high it was flying you could usually hear it up to 20km away, which gave the enemy plenty of time to hide, or set up an ambush.

It flew and landed around 30 meters from Juex’s position and nine soldiers jumped out and fanned out to secure the landing zone. The pilot then throttled back and left the engine at idle revs.

Soon the troops began to fan out looking around for Juex, poking the bayonets into random scrub bush’s etc looking, ever looking for the pilots of the downed aircraft.

A trooper came right up to the tussock he was hiding in, and poked his rifle around coming very close to stabbing Juex, Juex froze lying perfectly still….holding his breath, the soldier soon started moving along when disaster! Juex got cramp in his leg and started tossing and turning without realising. This quickly caught the attention of soldier. He turned and began heading back towards the tussock bush and lugged his bayonet a lot more throughout the bush and started parting parts in order to see. He soon found his man, but wasn’t looking just at a downed pilot in a bush……but a downed pilot in a bush covered in mud pointing a gun at his gentleman’s area.

“If you want to have kids again I suggest you stop right there and givers us that fancy rifle of yours” said Juex

Juex knew he wasn’t leaving here alive, so he thought might as well take as many of them with him as he can.

“Now now” Replied the solider cockily “No need to jump the gun there”

“Now listen here ~%!&#$!%head, keep it in your pants I’ve got a loaded gun
pointed where I could make some serious damage to your wife”

“We’ll see about that” replied the solider.

Juex pulled the trigger of his gun

*Click*

Juex closed his eyes in shear horror that his weapon did not fire. The solider laughed and picked him up by the stuff of his flight suit.

“SIR!” he yelled

“Got one!”

Soon all the troops and his CO gave running over.

They surrounded him and pointed there rifles at him.

“Well well well” said the officer” “What do we have here? A downed pilot
you say?....you wouldn’t be that pilot of that Jet who attack Wellington now would you?” the officer said with a sly grin.

Juex simply spat in his face

The officers smile disappeared.

“For crimes against humanity, I sentence you to death by firing squad, immediately”

“Sergeant major!, carry on”

Five troops took a dozen paces out in front of Juex, and stood in a line.

Juex stood definite at his closing death.

“SQUAD!”

“AIM”

Something caught Juex’s attention to something moving and forming behind the firing party, he smiled.

KEUMO! Someone yelled

The firing party stopped and looked around.

HE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Replied a thousand deep voices.

All around the small valley, stood over a thousand men standing hands on hips, rifles dangling from their shoulders.

A leader started Yelling.

Ringa pakia!

Uma tiraha!

Turi whatia!

Hope whai ake!

Waewae takahia kia kino!

Ka mate, ka mate!

Then suddenly the whole crowed began

Ka ora' Ka ora!

Ka mate, ka mate!

Ka ora Ka ora!

Tçnei te tangata pûhuruhuru !

Nâna i tiki mai whakawhiti te râ!

Upane! Ka Upane!

Upane Kaupane!

Whiti te râ,!

Hî!

Then slience……..

All the people standing around the valley stood slient. The Haka when preformed right, sounds awing even with a small group….but when a thousand do it at the top of their lungs, it was defying.

Juex slowly walked up to one of the soldiers and took his rifle off him, it was a French made FAMAS 5.56mm NATO round assault rifle used by the French military, well balanced and trust worthy weapon.

Juex pointed his FAMAS at the soldiers and they slowly began taking the weapons and webbing kit off. However the officer in charge remained standing and wasn’t serenading.

“Do it! Or I’ll blow your knee caps off and let you die here” Said Juex

“Never, not to scum like you”

Juex cocked his weapon violently and held it out at the officers right knee.

The officer stood still steering down Juex.

Juex was about to pull the trigger when suddenly a burst of red came from the back of his head and he dropped to the ground.

Oh well, save Juex from wasting a bullet.

Juex hog tied all the soldiers together and stood there looking around at the people standing on the hills around.

They were cheering and waving their rifles around in the air. Juex stuck his fist in the air and started making his way to the unoccupied helicopter and climbed into the cockpit and flew away.

After a long trip he finally arrived back at his base in Invercargill. He made his way to his room and sat his desk, opened his dairy and made an entry.

April 18th 2011

Well I’m finally back from the North Island…..well what to say about that…….lol we took pretty high casutilys compared to what I thought we would take.

500 dead and 1000+ wounded not to mention losing three Jets. However our objective was gained and we will plan another to keep them on their toes, I’m starting to question the……..the motivation of not only the troops but the officers as well. These constant large scale raids are killing us, and I fear we may lose everything if something isn’t done soon.
Juex looked at the entry and thought who would be the next to read it, if it would be read at all.



Shadowalker made his way into his stateroom and sat down, and began reading further into the entry’s

May 11th

Well after further contact with my Australian counterpart they have reported meteors making landfall also, I explained what had happened here and he sent further searchers in hope that survivors could be found.

May 15th

Well, the aussies have found a group of survivors but this group calls themselves the Interstellar Cultural Confederation. Reports say that they are led on this expedition by a one Chief Marshal Lightbreaker. They tell that the ICC is enemies of the UGTO faction who landed here, and there is a third Alien race who they both fight. We do not know if that race is coming here or not, both UGTO and ICC will not say anything about it.

“Aw ~%!&#$!%”





For Further and detailed info on the Rods and cones follow these links: (Note these weren't my sources, all knowlage is my own taught to me though Pilot training)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rod_cell

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cone_cell

As for the optic nerve blind spot test, here is a proper image you can print off, same instuctions at stated above.

http://www.daviddarling.info/images/blind_spot_test.gif









[ This Message was edited by: NZ-juex16 on 2011-04-21 02:25 ]
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From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-05-15 04:11   
Sorry the blind spot stuff i mixed up, my bad you must cover your left eye if you X is on the right.

This is why we have two eyes
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From: The land of venomous reptiles.
Posted: 2011-05-15 06:07   
Quote:


All the people standing around the valley stood slient. The Haka when preformed right, sounds awing even with a small group….but when a thousand do it at the top of their lungs, it was defying.


I know from experience.
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